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Ahmet KASIMOGLU
{K:2137} 6/5/2005
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very good. congr Alaria!...
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Angelo Villaschi
{K:49617} 6/4/2005
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Alaria,
Whatever it was, you need to get rid of it in PS. I did so in the pic I uploaded.
You have a great eye for a picture. Just need to pay a bit more attention to some details, so your beautiful work is not let down by poor presentation.
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Zé Ovo
{K:7579} 6/4/2005
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Very nice composition!
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Alaria Zilfo
{K:42} 6/4/2005
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Thank you Angelo, appreciate your comments. That dirt was due to something left on scanner glass surface...that was actually the first time I experiment with this kind of photography; took a bit of hard work - waking up early to capture in right light; climbing to that specific landscape scenery; carrying a bag of clothes and telling the model how to pose! if you take a look at, 'Crimson Blush' that is another photo of her...
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Angelo Villaschi
{K:49617} 6/4/2005
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You is???
That's a shock...
:)
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Paul Lara
{K:88111} 6/4/2005
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what Angelo said!
(I'll admit, i's a beautiful model in a sexy pose)
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Angelo Villaschi
{K:49617} 6/4/2005
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Nice idea, Alaria. The scene is nice, the model is gorgeous, the pose is attractive.
The execution needs to be improved, though, for it to be a great shot.
There's a big scratch/dirt line on the top left. That's "numero uno" and need to be retouched out.
Then the framing: the hand, foot and let are cut off by the frame. I would try to get at least her left hand and foot to be uncut.
The colours and contrast could use a bit of work, or maybe not, depending on your personal taste.
One further suggestion I would make is if you would like to try this as a b&w. I think it would look nice.
Hope you don't mind, I tried this out...
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