Hi Kevin, Welcome to UseFilm! Very nice shot, well spotted, and a creative solution. There are a few things that trouble me in this shot. First there's the tone, there seems to be a dull tone over the photo. Secondly, I think placing the lilly more off center would increase the appeal of this shot. Also, zooming in a bit more could also be an option.
I do like the reflection of the tree in the water, though. It adds a very good element to this shot. Attached a slight rework of your shot. Not a really good quality, but it gives an impression of what I had in mind...