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Joann Winborn
{K:12550} 5/18/2004
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Beautiful expression in this photo. You had a very lovely subject to work with. I think the lighting in your photo is more conducive to an evening setting, which is most likely when her "preparation" would be taking place.
I wouldn't change a thing.
God bless you and yours.
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Jon O'Brien
{K:11321} 5/18/2004
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Hi, Armando - I agree with Lou - nice use of B&W and added lighting. This is my first shot at a "portrait" (maybe it should be "fashion"?) and I can see there is much to learn.
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Jon O'Brien
{K:11321} 5/18/2004
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Hi, Miguel - thank you for your comments and interest. I do think that you added too much sharpening (although I also think that different monitors render the images differently, which makes it hard to tell). To me it looks like an image which has been deliberately sharpened, rather than one which is naturally sharp.
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Lou Dina
{K:12194} 5/18/2004
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Armando, I love the B&W you did of this photo ~ very nice. Lou
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Miguel Martinez
{K:5507} 5/18/2004
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Hi!
Please read my comment on this pic!
There is a question for you!
Miguel
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Miguel Martinez
{K:5507} 5/18/2004
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Hi!
I took Lou Dina version and I added a bit more sharpness! Pherhaps it is too much, I do not Know.
I would lik to know how Lou has coorected the shadow on the face, I tried but my result wasn't so good as Lou's
Miguel
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ARMANDO ALCÁZAR
{K:42404} 5/18/2004
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JON: I found this pic perfect just as it is. Besides being a good picture the model is beautiful, it look also well with more light just as put our friend Lou Dina
but since you requested comments and to proof, i dared to prove with the B&W but i dont know if you like it .
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Jon O'Brien
{K:11321} 5/18/2004
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Excellent - that improved the image immensely.
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Lou Dina
{K:12194} 5/18/2004
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I agree, fill in flash would have been nice. Beautiful lady. I used the Shadow/Highlight filter in Photoshop CS and added just a little sharpening to the eyes. Lou
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LaMaro Hall
{K:3658} 5/18/2004
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I think fill flash would have done wonders here. Let me see what I can do...
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