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ictenbey / Emrah ICTEN
{K:16316} 9/3/2006
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so nice photograph ! ...
well done ! ...
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deniz senyesil
{K:4052} 8/21/2006
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Selamlar Arzu,
Yine,Yeniden evet:) Muhtesem olmus.Tek kelime ile mukemmel.Derinlik ve renkler harika.Ellerine saglik.
Deniz.
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Asli Karabulut
{K:26} 8/19/2006
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outstanding honey... well done :)
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deniz senyesil
{K:4052} 5/5/2006
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Selamlar Arzu,
Tebrikler muthis!
Deniz.
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Arzu Tiraki
{K:1784} 4/16/2006
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Thank you very much for your comments and recommendations Doyle.
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Doyle D. Chastain
{K:101119} 4/11/2006
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Arzu:
This is a great capture with the nice, warm golden tones overhead and a nice variety of textures; from the whispy cloud covered sun to the subtle waves in the foreground.
There are, I believe, a few ways to improve this work. With your kind indulgence, I will put forth a few suggestions which are based on my opinion for your consideration. You may take what you like and discard what you wish, I only offer them to you to consider.
---1. The black items in the left center portion which are silhouetted in the composition are not needed. It would perhaps be better to crop them out. Keep in mind that the interesting area should not be in the exact center so the cropping must be done with that thought in mind.
---2. The amount of black (negative space) in the top of the photo is more than what is needed. Cropping some of it out will help balance the left side crop.
---3. I couldn't help but notice that a slight chage in brightness and contrast produced a very nice change in the overall image.
I am attaching your photo having quickly made those changes to illustrate my points. Really, there is very little changes I'm recommending and I do think you have a great capture here. In Nacho's comment we find the simpler critique . . . "Outstanding."
Regards,
Doyle I <-----
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Arzu Tiraki
{K:1784} 1/10/2006
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thank you rashed, i am trying my best
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Arzu Tiraki
{K:1784} 1/10/2006
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thank you very much
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Rashed Abdulla
{K:163889} 1/9/2006
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great composition and wonderful tone,very plesent image to view , wishing you all of the best my friend..
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Jose Ignacio (Nacho) Garcia Barcia
{K:96391} 1/9/2006
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great composition. outstanding. 7
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