Thanks for looking. This was just a quick vacation snap made while I was waiting to settle up @ the bar. I took the shot because, IMHO, the woman in the doorway (1 of the bartenders making a personal call) & the man reading by the window typify that part of the Mission neighborhood in SF.
I agree - the man on the right is perfect. And I like the idea of capturing someone passing by in the doorway, but she doesn't do it for me either... Did you work this idea for more exposures?
Nice exposure. Some will complain about the lack of detail in the room, but you can't have it all. I like the idea of this shot. I like the man in this one. The woman just doesn't quite fit in. It would be interesting to see what other outside influences could be introduced to this shot, but then you probably would not have the man in this pose. Nice shot.