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Critique By:
Sarah Hansegard (K:4332)
10/8/2003 8:47:13 PM
Brian-
Excellent fall image! I love how the trees are reflected in the water.
Sarah
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Critique By:
Cedric Sims (K:3259)
10/8/2003 7:37:42 PM
Beautiful colors & nice fall mood you captured.
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Critique By:
.l m,. (K:519)
10/8/2003 7:35:39 PM
Wonderful fall colors with a nice reflection in the water. Can't wait until they start turning by me.
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Critique By:
sandy c. hopkins (K:17107)
10/8/2003 7:25:08 PM
hi brian great shot...
makes me chilly just lookin at it! wooooweee...
i like the steam coming off the water...pardon...fog? i fish at a spot much like this, you caputered it well,,,
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Critique By:
Brian Hynes (K:522)
10/8/2003 3:47:31 PM
Becky - Again thank you for your advise, I will try and when done repost.
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Critique By:
Brian Hynes (K:522)
10/8/2003 3:45:10 PM
Becky - You are correct, I did added the light effect behind the cross, I thought that it was more powerful.
And no offence taken, this is exactly the comments I would like to get I am new to photography and gladly accept comments - Thank you - Brian
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Critique By:
Becky V (K:9699)
10/8/2003 1:22:12 PM
Please correct me if I'm wrong, but it looks like this photo was "post-processed" in order to add light to the cross, giving the photo a mystic feeling. While I have absolutely nothing against PhotoShoppery, I have to say that I don't think this photo needs it. I truly believe the sight of a crooked cross in the middle of an empty field carries enough impact and suggestion of spiritualism to negate the need for lighting effects . . . I feel it's akin to a touching story which has more impact when one finds out it's true. Plus, you have a beautifully exposed sky with some nice looking, tranquil clouds and it's a bit of a shame to see them so blown out in that one spot.
I apologize if my assumption about the PhotoShopping was incorrect. I also hope I didn't come off too harshly - I really do like the photo; I just don't think it needs the embelishment.
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Critique By:
Becky V (K:9699)
10/8/2003 1:11:48 PM
I think you're doing a great job - especially with the added contrast - but I'm not sure if it's quite done yet. There's still some scratches across the girl's nose and chin. Using a combination of the clone tool, the blur tool and perhaps an airbrush will get rid of them. There's also some yellow discolouration throughout the photo, especially on the girl's head, from below her eyes up to her hairline. You don't want her looking jaundiced! To fix this, you could select this area with the lasso tool, feather your selection, copy it to a new layer and then use the colour balance tool to add a bit more red, magenta and/or blue to even out her skin tones.
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Critique By:
Ordilei Caldeira (K:2545)
10/8/2003 5:33:56 AM
Brian, you wrote: "good photo, but what is your question?"
oh, i think you know!  I want to make you to reflect.
"... meanwhile the man burn again"
"... meanwhile the man learn"
its dependent of the kind of person you are.
About your pic:
In spite of low sharp and resolution, the composition is good.
See you Brian!
Ordilei
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Critique By:
Harald Felgentreu (K:2096)
10/7/2003 8:57:44 PM
this is a cool photo
Harald
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Critique By:
Brian Hynes (K:522)
10/7/2003 8:13:39 PM
Thanks Sandy - It is great to know other people share my desire for old and forgotton items that are so often disgarded.
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Critique By:
sandy c. hopkins (K:17107)
10/7/2003 7:58:00 PM
this kind of stuff is right up my alley...what a great project to choose to work on and what a wonderful job you did!
sandy
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Critique By:
Stefan Engström (K:24473)
10/6/2003 9:06:32 PM
I think you did a good job with colors. Assuming you cloned out the scratches but some remain on her chest (?) A good idea to leave some of the imperfections in the "unimportant" background.
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Critique By:
Leonardo Bosnia (K:4053)
10/5/2003 12:08:48 PM
I like it very much.Great camera for a very good photographer..
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Critique By:
Leo Solei (K:339)
10/5/2003 12:04:07 PM
Excellent macro!
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Critique By:
Arnaldo Schver (K:144)
10/5/2003 4:46:29 AM
Brian, you said you have difficulties on macro sharp shots with the 5700,
just don?t forget the flower icon on the viewfinder has to become yellow
instead of white, to be in the range of sharping macro shots. This you can have just adjusting the zoom. Hope I?ve helped.
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Critique By:
Amna Al Shamsi (K:21795)
10/4/2003 9:45:39 PM
very good macro and capture, however i think there is too much light in one side of the photo....but still looks good.
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Critique By:
Teresa Moore (K:11063)
10/4/2003 8:20:47 PM
Good macro. But get rid of him!
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Critique By:
Teresa Moore (K:11063)
10/4/2003 8:16:10 PM
He is not a pretty fellow. But, nice colors and detail. Good job.
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Critique By:
Joksa Juoperi (K:13473)
10/4/2003 1:05:58 AM
Good capture with nice perspective, lighting and colours.
A little bit too unfocused/unsharp.
Regards, Joksa.
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Critique By:
George Marks (K:15437)
10/3/2003 8:59:50 PM
A tighter crop would help a lot. So would a sharper focus.
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Critique By:
sandy c. hopkins (K:17107)
10/2/2003 4:57:06 PM
hello brian,
this photo gives me the feeling of a living entity living beneath the water..
which is kind of interesting because they say that life originated from water..something about it draws me..and i keep looking...
thank you
sandy
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Critique By:
sandy c. hopkins (K:17107)
10/2/2003 7:00:31 AM
this photo for some reason
gives me a feeling of hope..
thank you
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Critique By:
Christine Campbell (K:2693)
10/1/2003 10:20:31 PM
This is a great shot! I wish I could find interesting old outhouses and such to take photos of. I wonder how long it's been since it was used? When I was small (in the 70's) my parents almost bought a house out in the country with an outhouse. I've always been glad they didn't! Winters here can get cold and I didn't like the idea of having to leave the house to visit the john.
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Critique By:
RENATA RENATA (K:87)
10/1/2003 1:42:14 AM
very nice photo - if it can be said about a cementary )
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Critique By:
Brian Hynes (K:522)
9/30/2003 8:54:40 PM
Bill - Thanks for the comments, always appreciate constructive feedback
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Critique By:
Kelly Anbach (K:4375)
9/30/2003 8:08:01 PM
Brian, this is great in black and white. I used one of these in South Dakota when I was a little kid. (great great grampa's house). I think the composition is great!
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Critique By:
Kaan AYDIN (K:1984)
9/30/2003 7:33:31 PM
interesting picture i like it
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Critique By:
Stefan A. F. Kassler (K:3727)
9/30/2003 7:05:00 PM
Good color composition. Nice idea and well taken!
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Critique By:
Stefan A. F. Kassler (K:3727)
9/30/2003 7:03:33 PM
Interesting composition. The photo have "something". Excellent photo work.
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