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Critique By:
Vanessa Varoujian (K:1352)
9/12/2007 2:35:11 PM
Sarach,
Thank you, Ive been attempting to impove on my techniques of taking abstracts.
Your comments are positive and enthusing!
Vanessa
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Critique By:
Vanessa Varoujian (K:1352)
9/12/2007 2:33:13 PM
Emanuele,
Thank you very much for your comments.
Its so nice to recive positive feedback!
Vanessa 
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Critique By:
Vanessa Varoujian (K:1352)
9/12/2007 2:32:33 PM
Patrick,
I am trying to teach myself the different elements of photoshop, i may give it a go and try and remove the stain.
Many thanks for your kind comments!
Vanessa
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Critique By:
Manu (K:13082)
9/9/2007 10:27:35 PM
What a response and what a shot...good work, my dear.
Manu
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Critique By:
M jalili (K:69009)
9/9/2007 8:14:45 PM
I love this work so much . 7/7 .............
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Critique By:
sarah motallebi (K:1759)
9/9/2007 7:04:53 PM
very good composition
i like it's atmosphere
excellent POV
SArah
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Critique By:
sarah motallebi (K:1759)
9/9/2007 7:02:30 PM
great abstract
strong composition
bravo 7/7
SArah
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Critique By:
Emanuele Capelli (K:6110)
9/9/2007 6:04:58 PM
very nice shot!
..Emanuele..
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Critique By:
Emanuele Capelli (K:6110)
9/9/2007 6:04:13 PM
WOW!!!!! this is fantastic!!!
...very nice abstract!
..optimal composition...
well done!
ciao..Emanuele!
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Critique By:
Patrick Crowther (K:13393)
9/9/2007 6:02:54 PM
Yes, yes, yes, yes. This is wonderful. I love the composition and particularly the shifts in texture between the wall and frame. If I were you I might have removed the 'stain' on the wall just in from the dark shadow at the top left of the image. Goes into my favourites.
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Critique By:
Vanessa Varoujian (K:1352)
9/3/2007 9:44:54 PM
Thanks Dave,
We were driving in the car, and i took some pictures of distant lights. Because it was dark, the shutter speed was slow so i moved the camera as i tiik the picture, giving the dragged affect. Not such an interesting picture when you know how its done though!
Vanessa :)
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Critique By:
Dave Arnold (K:55680)
9/3/2007 9:15:57 PM
I'm not sure how you did this, Vanessa... but it sure does make a great light abstract!
Best wishes,
Dave
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Critique By:
Vanessa Varoujian (K:1352)
9/2/2007 8:31:06 AM
Brigitte,
Thank you so much for your kind comments!
I will try to catch her again and do my best to get some more photos of her. The weather here has been obismal for summer, so being outside in a nice setting has been almost impossible!
Shes a fox terrier. This was the fisrt photo i took of her, she has grown huge ammounts and and a hair cut since then also!
Thanks again,
Regards,
Vanessa :)
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Critique By:
Brigitte R. (K:25989)
9/2/2007 3:20:54 AM
Ohh how adorable... I love Poppy's fuzzy hair.... is she a Jack Russell or a Fox Terrier... either way, simply wonderful dog! I bet she keeps you entertained. I love her "cheeky" look! Lovely photograph... maybe a tad too harsh for lighting.... I would love to see some of your photos taken of her while outdoors in natural lighting. Pets make wonderful photographic subjects, although sometimes these guys can be so fast, they are difficult to capture in a good pose. PLEASE post more, I am a huge fan of these dogs!! :) 7+++ for cuteness!!
Warm regards,
Brigitte
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Critique By:
Vanessa Varoujian (K:1352)
9/1/2007 9:28:23 PM
Thanks for your comments Gary.
I really appreciate that you are honest! And i think you may be right.
I tend to over edit photos, and wanted to keep it simple this time, although i may have chosen the wrong image for this! however removing the people has definatly had a great effect.
Vanessa :)
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Critique By:
Billy Bloggs (K:51043)
9/1/2007 9:22:49 PM
Dave knows my feelings about over-editing, but it's definitely a better shot with the people gone. I also think conversion to monochrome would improve things. Still, you noticed the potential to start with...
Regards, Gary
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Critique By:
Vanessa Varoujian (K:1352)
9/1/2007 8:02:55 PM
Well, your forgiven 100 percent!
It looks a whole lot better, in fact i may edit it and then repost it! :P
I plan to upload photoshop to my computer tomorrow! :)
Thanks for your help!
Vanessa
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Critique By:
Dave Arnold (K:55680)
9/1/2007 7:58:19 PM
LOL, like I said, I understood what you really meant..
Forgive me, don't be offended... but I had to get rid of the guy blowing his nose... or maybe he was taking a picture of the cute blond... so I got rid of here, too.
Oh, the power of Photoshop...
Dave
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Critique By:
Vanessa Varoujian (K:1352)
9/1/2007 7:43:53 PM
Oh you know what im getting at! :P
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Critique By:
Dave Arnold (K:55680)
9/1/2007 7:41:44 PM
Quote: "it was almost impossible to get the shot without pictures"
LOL, I would bet it would be. (but I know what you mean)
Dave
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Critique By:
Vanessa Varoujian (K:1352)
9/1/2007 7:39:02 PM
Dave, I have to admit, your most probably right! But it was almost impossible to get the shot without pictures, there were so many people around, and being on a guided tour of london, i didnt have sufficient time to stop and take my time. However, i loved the effect of the reflection so much i felt i wanted to use the image anyway.
Many thanks for your comments!
Vanessa
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Critique By:
Dave Arnold (K:55680)
9/1/2007 7:38:53 PM
Quote: "I spent ages trying to get this shot!"
And see, that is what makes the difference between a "photographer" and a "snap-shooter". Great photo of an unusual object......
Best wishes,
Dave Arnold
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Critique By:
Vanessa Varoujian (K:1352)
9/1/2007 7:33:15 PM
Thanks Dave!
I spent ages trying to get this shot! I was pleased with it in the end...finally.
Many thanks for your comment :)
Vanessa
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Critique By:
Dave Arnold (K:55680)
9/1/2007 6:52:10 PM
I don't normally care for 45 degree angle photos but this rocks. It works very well with these objects! Much more appealing than a straight on shot, which I would have done because I am boring and have no imagination.... and I would've had a crap picture.... LOL
Best
Dave
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Critique By:
Dave Arnold (K:55680)
9/1/2007 6:48:46 PM
I really like this as an abstract and love the reflection on the pavement too. I think this shot would have been worth waiting for the people to leave the background. I find them a bit disturbing to the image, especially the guy blowing his nose. But then maybe it was your intention to incorporate people... or totally impossible not to have people running around.
Best wishes,
Dave
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Critique By:
Manu (K:13082)
8/27/2007 11:56:30 PM
One of my favs...it tells a story even without the title...well done
Manu
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Critique By:
Paul Lara (K:88111)
8/27/2007 11:26:28 PM
The expression looks more startled than worried. (and what BEAUTIFUL eyes!)
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Critique By:
Vanessa Varoujian (K:1352)
8/24/2007 9:56:54 PM
thanks chad. i really appreciate your feedback.
vanessa
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Critique By:
Chad Parish (K:6440)
8/23/2007 8:55:24 PM
Really good angle and detail on this shot. I like unique perspective pieces like this.
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Critique By:
Chad Parish (K:6440)
8/23/2007 8:48:06 PM
Really nice angle here Vanessa, I like the texture and the B&W. Good composition.
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