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robert jedrusik
{K:806} 1/20/2004
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knot!
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Charles Merfer
{K:8} 11/24/2003
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I agree that the foliage is distrating, though you can sense the obvious chemistry between you and the subject...
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Anindya Maity
{K:7880} 1/17/2003
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I don't think I like her face in the shadows.
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J
{K:2647} 1/17/2003
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Well well well!!! yes one could say that the heavy foliage behind her is distracting. I think maybe larger aperture could have helped but not necesarily as the shape of the background is that of an eye, in which the iris and the pupil are the girls head. The foliage makes for a beatifull composition, so if you should have used different aperture settings you should also think of the consequences for this background. It's a nice photo... her expression tends to be lost in the shadow though, I think thats the main problem.
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james mickelson
{K:7344} 1/8/2002
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Jason, this is a really nice model and your idea here was good too. But there are some things you could have done and things you could do now that would really make this a great image. Please email me at james_mickelson@hotmail.com or if you know about my class on black and white images please attaend. James
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Scott Jones
{K:1093} 1/8/2002
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I like the vertical rendition best. However, I find the heavy foliage behind her head to be quite distracting; like she is wearing a big hat. The pose is nice, but I think she gets lost in the background. Perhaps using less depth of field would help.
Scott
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