I like a lot the idea. Beautifull girl, and nice flower for the pictures. Was thinking, that changing a bit the composition (making the picture in horizontal way) would look better - the way it's now - I don't like the fact, that are visible fingers. How I'ld try to do is - to turn the face more to the right side, the flower on the shoulder, as it's now, and to make the picture in horizontal way - the way, that the corner of the flower matches with the corner of the picture. About the lighting: me, personally, I'ld prefare more soft lighting for this picture. In this case - I don't like the shadow of the nose (the left side). Also, the skin looks too burned. Anyway, it's still nice portrait. Regards