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Jose Ignacio (Nacho) Garcia Barcia
{K:96391} 12/12/2007
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very cool. wonderful. 7++++++++++
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Vikram Bose-Mullick
{K:554} 5/3/2004
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Regarding the building in france.. all I did is corrected the perspective. Building don't normally appear to fall backwards ;).
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Vikram Bose-Mullick
{K:554} 5/3/2004
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Another thing.. the color and res of ur camera is beyond poor. But does it really matter?? what do u think?
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Vikram Bose-Mullick
{K:554} 5/3/2004
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Hi Sudhir, this is a wonderful picture that you have made here! Excellent perspecive and a first rate idea. Excellent eye above all!! However here are the notes you requested. This picture has delecate sense of balance but the composition is somewhat careless. Human psycology, english readers are accustomed to scanning from left to right and hardly ever scan past the main subject. Let's virtually invert the image so the eye travels into the image with the girls faced away. Reduce tree and increase water and grass to greatly highten the sense of longing and push the girl to the right corner so the eye is FORCED scan the entire frame before dismissing the image. I hope my editorial changes didn't intrude upon ur concept.
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Ana Vianna
{K:15270} 12/29/2003
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Excellent work, Sudhir! Very beautiful composition! regards, my friend!
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Caprice Duvent
{K:3998} 12/27/2003
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j aime beaucoup le cadrage choisi pour cette composition :-)
Amitiés
Caprice
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