be nazarer man in be marateb zibatare, albate mosalaman nazare akkas mohemtare. manam ye ax shabihe balai daram, fekr konam tu ye zaman gereftim, vali fargh mikonan:
An interesting triptych, rather complex in its way. I like the idea of the closer view with each successive element, and the way the bottom image is less tall than the first. Perhaps you could continue this theme by reducing the height of the middle element so that it is mid-way between the heights of the other two.