Had potential. The background and the focus let this down buther expression is good and the framing isn't bad. Remember to look behind the subject, even that bottle on the floor is very distracting
i would agree with the others...many things you could od after the fact, but starting out with a few basics in place hels...a beautiful young model though...
I would have to agree with Mr. Arrey, I would just add a few comments. I would try and shoot her at eye level, (crouch down)and i would invest in a bounce flash, it would help you keep the harsh light off your subject, but nice try, and you have a great model.
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