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Critique By:
David Firth (K:786)
6/4/2005 1:29:31 PM
Nice tender shot, maria, you might want to consider cropping the tree in the background to the left.
Also, dont be afraid to use flash in the daylight...with this being backlit, the top of the head is getting some bright light. If you use a flash to fill in the shadow, you can achieve more even lighting. Regards.
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| Photo By: MARIA MURRAY
(K:118)
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Critique By:
David Firth (K:786)
6/4/2005 1:25:57 PM
Nice shot, maria, but I would have composed it slightly higher though, just a touch more sky above the tree and a little less foreground. I agree a nd filter would have helped here, ND is Neutral Density. It basically reduces the amount of light that can pass through the lense, and it would have cut some of the glare from the sun that is washing out the branch a little. Another option would have been to either reduce the exposure slightly, or to increase the aperture slightly, given that a deep depth of field is required on this shot anyway.
Thanks for your comment on my image, btw.
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| Photo By: MARIA MURRAY
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Critique By:
David Firth (K:786)
6/4/2005 1:14:30 PM
Nicely composed and executed silhouette with great warm colour, but I agree that the dots detract from the image...I cant make up my mind if it is dots on the water or if it is dust on the ccd. Shoot a clear sky at maximum f number and check for dots...
BTW, thanks for the comment on my "apollo", glad u like it.
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| Photo By: Judy Thibodeau
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Critique By:
David Firth (K:786)
3/1/2005 11:02:00 AM
Simply stunning.
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| Photo By: D De Vito
(K:414)
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Critique By:
David Firth (K:786)
3/1/2005 10:59:14 AM
I think I like this one a little better because of the nice colours, but the reflection on the snow in the other shot is great, too. Hard to decide, both good shots.
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| Photo By: Ali Naghizadeh
(K:19600)
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Critique By:
David Firth (K:786)
3/1/2005 10:56:46 AM
Good shot Ali, I really like this shot even with the sky being a little washed out. Thanks for the comment on my pic "Kangaroo"
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| Photo By: Ali Naghizadeh
(K:19600)
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Critique By:
David Firth (K:786)
3/1/2005 10:53:44 AM
Great shot, the inclusion of the tree limbs fills an otherwise ordinary section of the image well.
Thanks for your comment on my Harobour Bridge.
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| Photo By: D De Vito
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Critique By:
David Firth (K:786)
1/30/2005 1:07:41 AM
great use of the diagonal composition, very nice.
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| Photo By: Chad Parish
(K:6440)
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Critique By:
David Firth (K:786)
1/30/2005 1:04:53 AM
So many wonderful angles and lines. Great shot, well taken.
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Photo By: George Black
(K:102014)
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Critique By:
David Firth (K:786)
1/30/2005 1:03:43 AM
I like the angle and composition on this shot. works well, good shot
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| Photo By: Melanie Reynolds
(K:9096)
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Critique By:
David Firth (K:786)
1/30/2005 1:02:10 AM
I like the feel of this shot. Great tones on the skin and a nice composition.
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| Photo By: Melanie Reynolds
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Critique By:
David Firth (K:786)
1/30/2005 12:59:42 AM
Wow, this is a brilliant shot, so well captured. The angle is stunning and the high contrast gives it a surreal quality.
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| Photo By: Melanie Reynolds
(K:9096)
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Critique By:
David Firth (K:786)
1/30/2005 12:56:02 AM
Wow. Excellent shot, perfect in every way.
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| Photo By: Gabriella Carta
(K:22879)
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Critique By:
David Firth (K:786)
1/30/2005 12:54:03 AM
A well composed natural shot. Very good.
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| Photo By: Gabriella Carta
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Critique By:
David Firth (K:786)
1/30/2005 12:51:43 AM
Great light and composition, Gabry. I love the warm skin tones. It would also have been good if a bit of light was used to fill the face, maybe a small gold reflector. Nice shot.
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| Photo By: Gabriella Carta
(K:22879)
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Critique By:
David Firth (K:786)
12/13/2004 1:41:55 AM
I agree, the background works really well, and makes the image subject stand out nicely
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| Photo By: Melanie Reynolds
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Critique By:
David Firth (K:786)
12/11/2004 2:09:41 PM
I really like the composition of this shot, for whilst the eye is drawn naturally to the girl that is in sharp focus, there is a lot to look at in the other parts of the picture. Beautiful capture.
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| Photo By: Pat Fruen
(K:12076)
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Critique By:
David Firth (K:786)
12/11/2004 2:06:47 PM
I like this shot a lot, the use of DOF and the tone is really good. The pose is very natural, and the eye is easily drawn to the man in sharp focus. well done.
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| Photo By: AAT SA
(K:4565)
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Critique By:
David Firth (K:786)
12/11/2004 2:03:55 PM
A good portrait, the angle of the eyes adds interest to an otherwise standard composition.
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| Photo By: Janusz Borowik
(K:27)
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Critique By:
David Firth (K:786)
12/11/2004 2:02:24 PM
This is a really good shot in its own right, and I actually think that it is more interesting in composition than either the full shot or the other half (they were food too, but this is better). The Skin tone is excellent, the eye is sharp and the crop is interesting and well balanced. Great work
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| Photo By: Melanie Reynolds
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Critique By:
David Firth (K:786)
12/11/2004 1:57:55 PM
Wow! This is a really excellent shot. The dove going in front of the sun is brilliant. You should be very proud of this shot.
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| Photo By: Alex Comaschi
(K:1457)
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Critique By:
David Firth (K:786)
12/11/2004 1:55:47 PM
The angle and composition are really good, adn what wonderful expressive eyes the model has.
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| Photo By: John Fiore
(K:1077)
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Critique By:
David Firth (K:786)
12/11/2004 1:53:18 PM
Great composition, I like the lighting of this. Well done
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| Photo By: ahmed lotfy
(K:1487)
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Critique By:
David Firth (K:786)
12/11/2004 1:52:02 PM
Avey tranquil scene, and well captured.
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| Photo By: Chris Spracklen
(K:32552)
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Critique By:
David Firth (K:786)
12/11/2004 1:49:34 PM
Such deep colours, beautiful
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| Photo By: Chad Parish
(K:6440)
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Critique By:
David Firth (K:786)
12/11/2004 1:48:47 PM
I really like the composition on this shot, well done
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| Photo By: barbara
(K:95)
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Critique By:
David Firth (K:786)
12/11/2004 10:24:09 AM
Good creativity, Stace...I also think the 2 shots on the right are good in their own right, I would particularly like to see the one on the far right posted as a straight up portrait.
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| Photo By: Stace Walker
(K:4175)
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Critique By:
David Firth (K:786)
12/1/2004 1:02:03 PM
I like the use of the high contrast and even though some parts are slightly washed out, I think that it enhances rather than detracts from the overall effect. Good work.
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| Photo By: Samantha P
(K:1961)
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Critique By:
David Firth (K:786)
12/1/2004 12:55:43 PM
Love the duotone on this shot, and the clarity is excellent. Good work.
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| Photo By: Sven Burkhard
(K:3467)
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Critique By:
David Firth (K:786)
12/1/2004 12:50:55 PM
Absolutely stunning shot, love the warm tones in the sky.
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| Photo By: Miguel Andrade
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