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Critique By:
andrew davis (K:88)
11/14/2003 7:21:18 PM
Very attractive tonal range, from a subject which has quite tricky light, well done
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| Photo By: Kenneth Kwan
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Critique By:
andrew davis (K:88)
2/6/2003 12:05:00 AM
really excellent, great to see a well executed project that combines a creative idea and superb technical execution, good luck when the 'anti edit' folk wake up, dear me they will have a fit, lol
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| Photo By: Erik Hansen
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Critique By:
andrew davis (K:88)
2/5/2003 8:49:53 PM
as a series of 'expressions' I've been taking the theme of obsolesensce... taking the images of relics of the instruments of 'power' to enhance as vivid reminders of distant memories, in the twilight years of fading into oblivion... enhancing them with atmospheric weather conditions to hint at how those instruments of power changed the world. I'm not over keen on being obsessive about the technical aspects of how the images were produced, other than to say I explore tools in a way that that are new to me. The lightning was produced by tinkering with algorithms to create the lightning effect of bodiam being 'lit up', a metaphor for the way the ghastly demons of bastion and feudal power gave way to the rise of nation states, a dark age of rule by fear giving away to the enlightened age 'network' of national governments and institutions...
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| Photo By: andrew davis
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Critique By:
andrew davis (K:88)
2/5/2003 7:58:58 PM
very attractive sunset shot, the silhouettes add interest, your captions are a bit distracting though
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| Photo By: Verna Absolutestockphoto
(K:2836)
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Critique By:
andrew davis (K:88)
2/5/2003 7:34:08 PM
superb background and sky, a bigger piccy might do more justice to it?
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| Photo By: Sylvia Jones
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Critique By:
andrew davis (K:88)
2/4/2003 9:46:05 PM
tricky twilight scene, the motion blur might work better if you had waves going over rocks a little more, a slight flash might add a bit of sparkle to the scene, overall an attractive dusky scene
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| Photo By: Andrew Lahanas
(K:7062)
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Critique By:
andrew davis (K:88)
2/3/2003 5:33:28 AM
all the shots in your folio are on the light side lacking contrast, you may want to complain harvey, lol
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| Photo By: andrew davis
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Critique By:
andrew davis (K:88)
2/3/2003 4:58:33 AM
try adjusting the brightness control harvey. its typical for windows monitors to have badly adjusted gamma levels and fail to display a range of darker tones
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| Photo By: andrew davis
(K:88)
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Critique By:
andrew davis (K:88)
2/3/2003 2:44:08 AM
stylish composition, just a tiny bit short on clarity
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| Photo By: Sujit Nandi
(K:555)
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Critique By:
andrew davis (K:88)
2/2/2003 11:57:56 PM
great sense of movement, the crest appearing over the surfers head is a nice touch, my only niggle would be their isnt much sight of the figure
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| Photo By: William R Eastman III
(K:2141)
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Critique By:
andrew davis (K:88)
2/1/2003 10:04:22 PM
superb timing, with those colours and tones catching the last of the light...
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| Photo By: Steve Mekata
(K:610)
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Critique By:
andrew davis (K:88)
1/31/2003 11:51:32 PM
quite a spectacular scene with an unexpected dusting of snow, really really needs to be a bigger photo to do justice to it
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| Photo By: Chor Wong
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