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Critique By:
Arthur Sevestre (K:552)
2/4/2003 5:06:36 AM
Hi Darrin. They sure posed nicely for you! I like the action and interaction in this photo. It's too bad though that the photo is a bit soft. Also the foliage in the background is a bit distracting. Otherwise very nice photo.
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| Photo By: Darrin James
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Critique By:
Arthur Sevestre (K:552)
2/4/2003 3:39:37 AM
The emotion of loneliness is really well captured in this photo. The expression in Holly's eyes is really good. It would have been so great if Holly would have been in perfect focus though, especially her eyes. The unsharpness keeps this from being much stronger, because the composition is really working well too. One other point is that the yellow things in the left of the photo are a bit of a distraction. It's not really possible for me to tell what they are and that makes my eyes go there again and again to try and identify it. Apart from these two points, this is a nice photo. I hope you'll be able to try it again. Regards!
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| Photo By: Li Fan
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Critique By:
Arthur Sevestre (K:552)
2/4/2003 3:34:14 AM
Glen, I think this is almost perfect! The capture of the expression and the detail in the fox are really good. Unfortunately, the little twig or piece of plant that gives the blur in the photo, right in front of the fox, is quite distracting to me. For the rest, all those grass, flowers and leafs are making a really perfect surrounding for the fox. It's just that one little piece that disturbs me. Regards!
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| Photo By: Glen Gaffney
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