The emotion of loneliness is really well captured in this photo. The expression in Holly's eyes is really good. It would have been so great if Holly would have been in perfect focus though, especially her eyes. The unsharpness keeps this from being much stronger, because the composition is really working well too. One other point is that the yellow things in the left of the photo are a bit of a distraction. It's not really possible for me to tell what they are and that makes my eyes go there again and again to try and identify it. Apart from these two points, this is a nice photo. I hope you'll be able to try it again. Regards!
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