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Dan TDFoto
{K:8618} 10/24/2005
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I need to carry my camera more when i am farting around down town...how do you ever get any work done! haha Good work my friend...love the structure and comp...plus the feeling of pressure since the sticks are so twisted. Dan
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Doc Roberts
{K:549} 10/22/2005
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Hey Justin! That doesn't look too bad! I still like the original though. Nice try. Maybe I will try and re-create the shot during the day to see if I can get something different out of it.
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Justin Campbell
{K:1398} 10/21/2005
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Perhaps it does. I just inverted it and upped the curves a bunch. I think i like the original more though.
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![](http://thumbs.imageopolis.com/CritiqueImages/3/7/5/2/3752/960675-TN.jpg) Inverted |
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Doc Roberts
{K:549} 10/21/2005
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Thanks for the comments Justin. This was shot outside at night, and my lens was pointing skyward, so I really can't do much with the background. The night sky can only be made so light. I have already altered the brightness/contrast of the shot. Any more alteration would start to wash out the structure. However, it would probably make a pretty cool negative image.. hmmmmm.
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Justin Campbell
{K:1398} 10/21/2005
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Good Work Darren. very appealing to the eyes and nice composition. Was this indoors or outdoors? studio or not? I would like to see the background lightened more than the sculpture. Other than that, great job. Also, thank you very much for commenting on my work justin
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Darlene Boucher
{K:15739} 10/21/2005
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Wonderful lines and love the black and white! Great composition Darren!
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