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Pat Fruen
{K:12076} 10/2/2005
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Very sweet moment and nicely framed by the trees.
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sammy -
{K:4108} 9/5/2005
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heh heh
Kes-
Although by chance, it followed immediately after your cropped version, "Print it darker... " wasn't a comment about your printing of it.
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Nelson Moore [Kes] -
{K:20241} 9/5/2005
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Sammy -
Yeah, I was coming to that conclusion also. I might darken that second shot, but I don't really like the extra space to the right of the tree (on the right side). The toning down above the kids is probably ok.
one problem, this shot is "out of sequence" for what I had in mind for this "spot". Should have been a color shot...
:-)
...thanks for your comments.
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Nelson Moore [Kes] -
{K:20241} 9/5/2005
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Thanks Susie!
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Nelson Moore [Kes] -
{K:20241} 9/5/2005
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Thank you Janet! Your photos are inspiring me to try more often with my kids.
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Nelson Moore [Kes] -
{K:20241} 9/5/2005
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Thanks jude!
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Nelson Moore [Kes] -
{K:20241} 9/5/2005
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Thank you, Darlene!
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Nelson Moore [Kes] -
{K:20241} 9/5/2005
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Thanks TR.
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TR
{K:591} 9/5/2005
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Good capture kes, a wonderful mood..
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Susie OConnor
{K:34798} 9/4/2005
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I like it Keseph. Very contrasty, but it works well here with the b/w and the trees. Has a really nice feel to it.
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Janet B
{K:16139} 9/4/2005
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Great photo, Keseph! Love how she has a stick....looks like she is ready to defend the little one who is clinging! Congrats!
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sammy -
{K:4108} 9/4/2005
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Y'know Kes
I like it better the way you had it originally! heh That's the way it goes sometimes....
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jude .
{K:14625} 9/4/2005
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Great image, Keseph...terrific capture.
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Nelson Moore [Kes] -
{K:20241} 9/4/2005
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Sammy, lol, I thought I was darker...but was working off the original again...
second photo not as dark, yet with highlights toned down.
I'll take another look later...
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sammy -
{K:4108} 9/4/2005
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He also always had a black pen.
He would move it around over our pictures and say, "Where's the black?"
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sammy -
{K:4108} 9/4/2005
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Kes-
When I was just a kid printing 6x6 verichrome, shot with a TLR Cirroflex, people kept saying, "Print it darker"
Much later, in photo classes for two years, on hundreds of assignments teacher used his hands, ... "What if you cropped it here, what if you cropped it there?"
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Nelson Moore [Kes] -
{K:20241} 9/4/2005
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Here's a different crop, as per Sammy.
Also, a little more centered, as per anthony.
Still has the 4 - 6 pairs...
;-)
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sammy -
{K:4108} 9/4/2005
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There is a gob of dark branches just above their heads, I'd crop it just above. Maybe an eensty weensty bit off the left too.
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Darlene Boucher
{K:15739} 9/4/2005
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Beautiful sight to see, and so sweet! Definely a wall hanger!
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a. M.
{K:9020} 9/4/2005
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this is a great shot...i love the composition and the b+w...awesome..i think the centering though is a little off..maybe if you would of stood a little bit more to your left it would have made it more centered, different angle. just my opinion..great shot either way
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Nelson Moore [Kes] -
{K:20241} 9/4/2005
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Ok Sammy, how come you can "see" the crops so well? I have a difficult time with that.
I'm looking at a crop, at your suggestion, leaving some of the branches over their heads... I'll post it later.
;-)
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Nelson Moore [Kes] -
{K:20241} 9/4/2005
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Thank you Linda, for your most kind comment! I have a hard time "seeing" shots of my kids...I think they are all just fine. :)
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sammy -
{K:4108} 9/4/2005
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I like it Kes. Actually there is a lot there.
Try darkening the whole upper right background, or maybe crop off the top so becomes square format.
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Linda Imagefree
{K:72276} 9/4/2005
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Oh this one goes straight to my favs...not much here? Says who this is wonderful, I love everything about it...the tones and natural framing are beautiful...great work Keseph...:):)
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