Phil, that looks great! See how your first comment was about her eyes, they are now much more noticeable! One more tiny thing I would do. Do the same thing I told you, but this time only select the whites of her eyes. Then you when you click on the layers pallette, this time instead of a "levels" layer, make a "hue/saturation" layer. Then desaturate till the whites of her eyes are less red. Looks like there is some color cast in the whites of her eyes. Then after you desat, then lighten a little bit. Remember you can adjust the opacity of this layer in the layer palette keeping it natural looking!! I think it will brighten them up just a bit more. I thought I would go ahead and add this since it's such an important portrait!!
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