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Mário Sousa
{K:16985} 8/5/2003
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Beautiful
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ana ribeiro
{K:21290} 5/10/2003
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good
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David Goldfarb
{K:7611} 5/20/2001
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Just looked at your portfolio. I bet you used that Vivitar 28-90 on this one. That would explain the barrel distortion. I'm also a Canon FD user. Try one of the Canon prime wide lenses to solve that problem. The 28mm/f:2.8 is pretty inexpensive, if you're cost conscious, and it produces a nice rectilinear image. The Sigma 24mm/f:2.8 is also a surprisingly good lens with negligible distortion (probably as good as the Canon 24/2.8 in optical quality, but not in build quality), and is typically cheap on the used market, just because it's a Sigma.
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David Goldfarb
{K:7611} 5/20/2001
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I love the scene, the concept, the forms created by the light, and the tonality, but the structure seems to be leaning back a bit. I think what happened is you lined the right side of the doorframe up with the edge of the viewfinder frame, but the lens you're using has some barrel distortion visible at the edges, which makes it tough to find "vertical," and then there's a bit of convergence due to the low camera position with respect to the door. Add it all together and the left side of the doorframe isn't lined up anymore, giving the whole structure a leaning appearance.
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al shaikh
{K:15790} 4/11/2001
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This shot works for me I like play of the light here compared to a few of the others, this one holds all that negative space better. Nice job
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Artie Colantuono
{K:12275} 4/10/2001
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My eye wants to trim off a little bottom and a bit of the left to almost center this. Take more advantage of the real estate (pic frame). I like the mood and the attitude of this pic. You can do the cropping on your puter. Nice shot however.
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