Hello Paul, well composed abstract I also thought "Cedar-Rattlesnake Point" was good as well but this is more crisp of the 2. Both shots are similar to the works of Ed Weston, the contrast is superb. For this if I may suggest to balance out the frame by cropping just a fourth of the top or pan down to include more of the concrete & door. Other than that I like the shot, cheers & best wishes.
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