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Phillip Swanson
{K:7013} 12/29/2004
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hey mandy,
i used photoshop CS for the whole thing, the paper i downloaded from a stock photography site, and cut a good portion of it out and then started copy and pasting to create the whole page.... now after a day, looking at it i dont like the black on the right hand side, id rather have the paper color all the way to the edge, and i couldnt add everything on the page, your logo design, and the smaller print that you had on yours on the bottom, but this was just a layout design, could catch the eyes of the seniors as a flyer you hand out, gives it that younger look, hope your design comes out great,
phil
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Carla Stephens
{K:3148} 12/28/2004
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Very cute...I like.
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mandy welsh
{K:3146} 12/28/2004
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thats really cute what program did you use for the notebook paper?
~mandy
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Phillip Swanson
{K:7013} 12/28/2004
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forgot to put the image in
phil
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Phillip Swanson
{K:7013} 12/28/2004
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just an idea, jsut whipped it together i remember you saying this is a flyer so the landscape layout shouldnt matter, let me know your thoughts, i tried to keep it simple, i know i prob didnt add everything but just a layout idea and geared towards people in school
regards
phil
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mandy welsh
{K:3146} 12/28/2004
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Paul,
you do have a point! Thank you for pointing that out. It must have slipped my mind being so late and all. I'm half asleep.
~mandy
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Paul Lara
{K:88111} 12/28/2004
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Something a little more marketing oriented, Mandy:
I would not use the word 'Pictures' in the title.
something more professional, like Photos or more personal like Portraits would convey a greater sense of professionalism than 'picture'. A 'picture' is what Uncle Bob takes for free. ;)
...something to ponder,
-Paul
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mandy welsh
{K:3146} 12/28/2004
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Carla,
thank you for your indepth feedback. It always helps to have extra eyes to 'proof' your work before you finalize your decisions. I can only speak for my own thoughts, not others, so it is very valuable to me. thank you for your time. I have another poster that is getting no feedback if you'd be interested to look and tell me whats so wrong with it? I am currently working on my 'weddings' poster and putting your guys' thoughts into it first before I change this one.
~mandy
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Carla Stephens
{K:3148} 12/28/2004
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Mandy, I have to agree with Tara, the font is thick and when using bullets, the text should be left justified. I also don't care for this bullet type. Personally, I think the solid dot bullet is sufficient and provides a more professional look. You may also want to reduce the number of font types and sizes, possibly no more than three. I like the pictures, but perhaps the price is low considering you are shooting on location. The second bullet that reads "about 20 proofs to view, keep and share". If the client can keep these, I don't think it is necessary to say "view". You may also consider the term Approximately as opposed to About.
I am interested to see your final outcome. Best of luck to you.
Regards,
Carla
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Tara Gullett
{K:1678} 12/28/2004
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You're welcome Mandy... if you want any idea of how text should be staggered.. varied let me know and I can email a jpeg w/ your text for an idea. gulletts3@verizon.net
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mandy welsh
{K:3146} 12/28/2004
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Tara,
thank you for the honest comments they are greatly appreciated! I'd like to get a variety of feedback before I look into changing anything but feel free to give me feedback on anything else, I value it! I loked through your portfolio too. Nice to meet you!
~mandy
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Tara Gullett
{K:1678} 12/28/2004
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Hey... just a note to say that I think the font is too thick and should be varied more.. also I would align the text to the left instead of centering it..maybe also your contact information might be a little too small.. I have a Graphic Arts degree if you need any more help .. let me know..willing to help for free. Tara ; )
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