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Ryan Greene
{K:3297} 10/1/2004
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Thanks Phillip, I think desaturating the yellow in the lens helps a bit. The B & W seems better to me because it lacks the yellow color completely.
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Ryan Greene
{K:3297} 10/1/2004
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Very true, thank you Jeff.
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Ryan Greene
{K:3297} 10/1/2004
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Thanks Ameed. I did soften the edges while creating this, but I guess a little more couldn't hurt. We'll see what happens...
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Jeff Fiore
{K:11277} 10/1/2004
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Well, the color one is no better or worse than the B&W one. It is just a different dynamic feel. Both work equally well - the B&W focuses attention on the eyes, the color is more subtle meaning that it is a normal photo with an unreal eye. Each works well but speaks in a different way.
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Nando Mondino
{K:14261} 10/1/2004
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Wonderful composition!
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Phillip Swanson
{K:7013} 10/1/2004
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i like the black and white better, but could be persueded, to the color version, my only thing would be to soften the contrast on the camera lens eye... here ill try let me know, i softened the saturation, and blurred the little yellow dot a bit... dont know, i seem to still be drawn to the b and w
phil
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Mark Susa
{K:2301} 10/1/2004
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It looks real enough to me, Ryan. However the yellow catchlight makes the whole thing a little odd... Nice job.
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Ameed El-Ghoul
{K:42215} 10/1/2004
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Hi Ryan, creative work, and i should congratulate you for asking for criticism, well it looks a little pasted, i think the secret is about softening the edges of the iris, try to soften it a little and see. Very well done and creative work, regards,
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Howie Mudge
{K:27933} 10/1/2004
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An interesting digital effect Ryan.
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