Sarah: Very well done my friend. I really like the perspective, and the crop is quite appropriate. Personally, I like shadowing on this, and yet able to see all the detail, especially in your eyes. Very very nice. BRAVO!
It looks as if it were 1 hour or 2 before or after 12pm, the shadows are too strong, the combination of colors is not very armonic, maybe in BW would look better. I like the expression though.