The lighting in this one is really throwing me off. Fred's corset is really white, but there's no light around her. If only she could glow. This is really well lit though. I'm a big fan of this because Graeme looks so goofy, but both Fred and Julianne look so suggestive. Julianne especially. I like how her eyes are looking at the camera. Because both Graeme and Julianne are looking at the camera it kind of make Fred seem left out. I like the shadows over the part of Julianne's face near Graeme's, solid black - very sharp looking. However the overall expressions on everyone are really great. This looks really well set up, there's a word for this photo that I'm looking for, but I can't put my finger on it. Almost like... Who Framed Roger Rabbit, except with everyone cartoony, but that's not what I'm going for. Hard to put my finger on it, but I really like this. Great work!! :)
while in this one, I find the expression on both the "subject" and the "evil" very very expressive. I would have wanted to see more from the "good"'s face. The idea is very good! keep shooting! cheers eva