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Mahamed Ariffin
{K:7114} 8/31/2004
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wow,Jon, thnx so much...you have made such a drastic improvement over my original. I will remember to adjust my pictures later on. Thnx again
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Mahamed Ariffin
{K:7114} 8/31/2004
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Stephen, thnx for welcoming me to Usefilm! Terima kasih!
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Stephen Bowden
{K:64141} 8/29/2004
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Wonderful portrait Mahamed - "jumba lagee" (back later ?) - I forgot to say a very big welcome to Usefilm :-)
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Jonathan Charles
{K:5248} 8/29/2004
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PS I have attached a quickly modified version but you could do it better with more time.
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Cleaned-up background |
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Jonathan Charles
{K:5248} 8/29/2004
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Very well captured expressions but I agree with Alison that the background is too cluttered and detracts from the picture. As well as cropping the car I would compress the nice tree to include it without disturbing the balance and also put the window out of focus, finally adding a slight vignette to the lower corners to match the top.
The other problem that unfortunately can't be fixed now is that the bright areas are over-exposed and just blank - this is a common problem with sigital cameras: if you can adjust the contrast it should be set to minimum (eg -5), if not you can make a second shot deliberately under-exposed and import detail from the highlight areas into the original.
Best wishes, Jonathan.
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Mahamed Ariffin
{K:7114} 8/28/2004
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Oh yes, you are right. Thanks, Alison
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Alison DuFlon
{K:36566} 8/28/2004
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Mahamed, beautiful colorful shot. the only thing that I think I would have done, is cropped out the car and come closer in around the 2 women. Alison
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