i LIKE YOUR WORK A LOT. It reminds me of the times I visited Providence, while in the U.S. Navy at Newport R.I. This is a great vision that you have. Thanks for using a great film.
I think the main issue with your picture is that one cannot really figure out what the strong point of the picture is - i.e. the subject, the message, the feeling, behind it. Is it the women (what about them ?), is it the statue (what's special about it ?), is it the city etc ...
Hope I'm not being to harsh on you, but this is what this site is about. Giving constructive opinions.