A perfect Split ratio, well done. The Ratio however is a little harsh and should be brought up too a 1:5 instead of the 1:9 that you have achieved here. A little fill should take care of this.
The model seems to static, try a foot backward and have the model put all his weight on that foot. This should create a nice S curve that we all look for in posing.
You also seem to be getting wrap around from the yellow gelled light in the background, try a flag.
Concordo, mesmo a foto tendo um forte contraste e sendo um trabalho livre. Necessitava aparecer a face talvez um rebatedor resolveria o problema. o filme ficou quase sem informação na parte escura. Muito obrigado pelo seu comentário.
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