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jon parsons
{K:13639} 1/27/2004
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Hugo, in answer to your question, I like it very much! beautiful bird with great framing affects... wonderful work....jon
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Andrej V
{K:6693} 1/27/2004
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What a birds they are... Really elegant! The idea of making it BW and leaving the object in colors is alwas something special! It really outprint what we want to be outprinted! You composed it just great...
PS: Don't bother Hugo, I do some comments in native language too when writing to Breda Kroselj etc... But since you wrote quite a few lines(not just hi, or beutifull) I assumed that it was something constructive. And constructive coments you write (as allready said) are allways good to read! My best and friendly greets (groeten) Andrej
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Teunis Haveman
{K:53426} 1/27/2004
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Hugo, mooie opname Je kunt de kracht zien van deze zwaan Waarom de tekst in de foto Je zou hem ook in de frame kunnen plaatsen Groet teunis
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Roberto Arcari Farinetti
{K:209486} 1/27/2004
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fantastic I love the swan.. and your elegance! congrats roby
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Gerhard Hoogterp
{K:4863} 1/27/2004
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Tja, the swan is overexposed, the letter lack contrast with the water and the see-through lines at the bottom don't really add a lot either. While the Elegance and grace are there, the power doesn't really show from the photo either.
But maybe you just didn't go far enough.. I've been playing a little with it too and if it's for photoshop, go all the way (oh well, a bit further..;)
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![](http://thumbs.imageopolis.com/CritiqueImages/0/0/6-TN.jpg)
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Thamer Al-Tassan
{K:1358} 1/27/2004
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1. Maybe more depth would have gave a much more dramatic feel to it (less static and boring). 2. A different font and arrangement would work better. 3. The font's color would look better if it was a solid color instead of a texture.
Good try anyways!
- Thamer
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Jani Salvataggio
{K:27283} 1/27/2004
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Very beautiful!!
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