Diego, I like the pose and the dedication of the boy on the right; He's really into his water game. With the composition as it is now, my attention is (randomly) diverted between the two boys and the canoe. I miss a real focus point. (meaning, I like the composition, but I think I would have composed it differently; the tree points of attraction would make a very nice tryptich!)
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{K:15402} 1/16/2004