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Nedim Muhic
{K:14362} 1/14/2004
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Wow, excellent work! Amazing lighting and excellent composition! Regards, Nedim.
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Robert Walls
{K:1728} 1/12/2004
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Nice mood in this pic. B&W is the perfect treatment for this.
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michaelle .
{K:3807} 1/12/2004
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Donna, I really like the graphic representation in this image, the sillouettes are wonderful. I would have to agree, however that the image is a tad dark, with no real light greys or whites, therefore making it appear flat. You do not have to go for the high contrast black and white everytime, but with this image, it is inherently higher contrast (light sky and black silouettes. I do this a couple of ways, the first is to just dodge in selective areas to make them a little lighter (this would retain the full black silouettes of the boats) or secondly, I apply a levels adjustment layer and bring up the midtones and highlights a tad (this will give some details in the boats) and then selectively dodge and burn items that you feel are still not falling in the correct exposure range.
I really like the composition of this image and the pelican "looking over things" is the perfect touch. Very well seen!
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c c
{K:13449} 1/12/2004
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Donna, I just love this shot---the seagul watching over his/her turf. Excellent contrast and tones. I think the darkness is good and reinforces the time of day---dusk. Great work! Charisse
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Bjorn Beheydt
{K:12096} 1/12/2004
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Very well seen Donna, great picture. I do agree that it could've been a little lighter, I think it might help to get the pole a bit more seperated from the background in the lower part of the picture.
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Craig Garland
{K:27077} 1/12/2004
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Hi Donna; beautiful shot and nice in B&W-- and coincidentally, I shot a seagull today;>) Cheers. Craig
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NN
{K:26787} 1/11/2004
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A great capture Donna ... lovely mood!
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Monty Emken (Ostracon X)
{K:4804} 1/11/2004
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I've actually been to Morro Bay. A very pretty town! How are the Peregrine's? Great photo.. Nice catch!!
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DELETE ACCOUNT
{K:5655} 1/11/2004
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A nice B/W shot. The bottom is a little bit dark. I like the title.
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Anwar Vázquez
{K:408} 1/11/2004
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Hermosa foto, me encanta especialmente el detalle del ave en loa lto del poste, la hace ver muy urbana, a la ves metafórica. Buen trabajo!
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Rachel Leah
{K:26110} 1/11/2004
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Nice picture! I like the contrast and the lighting is good, could be a little lighter but it is still a great picture! Good job! ~Rachel~
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