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Daniel L Quigley-Skillin
{K:1383} 5/22/2003
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Quite different from the rest of your work. I agree with Kim, the background is too busy. The closeup is definately remarkable - and more indicative of your work.
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Kim Culbert
{K:37070} 11/19/2002
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The background seems a bit busy, but since its all in a neutral shade it not too bad. The one thing that feels awkward to me is the hand peeking in at the bottom... I would opt for it to be hidden, or crop above the hand. The close up knocks me on my butt though. What gorgeous eyes pop from the screen!
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Chris Blaszczyk
{K:610} 11/19/2002
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Again... closeup with more detail...
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Chris Blaszczyk
{K:610} 11/19/2002
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Oh, C'mon. You can recommend me anything on anyday. I posted this pic just because I like the lighting. I've been trying lately to create some surreal athmosfere in my photos, but I have alot to learn. :)
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meprivacynet@meprivacy.net meprivacynet@meprivacy.net
{K:3974} 11/19/2002
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Did I say "keep trying"?!
Sorry for giving you "recommendation" ? I did not check for the author name. I'm not in position to recommend anything to you Chris, the only thing I can do is to learn from you.
Ups!:)
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meprivacynet@meprivacy.net meprivacynet@meprivacy.net
{K:3974} 11/19/2002
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It is definitely good for a casual pic ? she has very interesting face and there are many things you can do if you experiment with light and shadows. I like the mix of background colors and color of her outfit too.
In my amateur opinion there are few things you can improve: 1) she is not relaxed and she is posing. It is good and necessary, but also important to watch for not "over cooking" 2) I like the lightning on her face, but something is going on with her eyes and it hurts the picture. 3) she has 3 fingers.
I think there is a great potential in this picture, set and light. Keep trying and thank you for sharing your work:)
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