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Emgy Massidda
{K:60358} 12/1/2003
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Questo lo chiamerei piu' un primo piano che una macro. Sarebbe stata una macro se avessi ripreso solamente la parte dei petali oppure un qualsiasi altro particolare da una distanza molto corta. E'una bella composizione e l'idea di usare una sciarpa rossa in seta grezza come sfondo e' ottima. L' unica cosa che disturba un po' e' la luce molto forte che rende i petali quasi sfuocati. Una rosellina secca e'bella e forse persino piu' misteriosa ripresa con meno luce. Potresti riprovare la stessa compositione per un close up, oppure riprendere solamenta la rosa (senza lo stelo e foglie) nel centro oppure di lato, come preferisci. Cara Antonella, questo e' soltanto un suggerimento, non una critica. Ta tua foto sarebbe stata perfetta con luce adatta
Cioa e buona serata - Emgy
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Richard Thornton
{K:26442} 12/1/2003
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Yes, too much exposure on the flower, blowing out the details in the subtle white areas. Less exposure would also make you background colors richer and the flower would still stand out.
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jon parsons
{K:13639} 12/1/2003
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Antonella, this is a lovely work... just beautiful.. congratulations....jon
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In Transit
{K:29432} 12/1/2003
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This viewer can not... but grant full marks for a 'first'
There are solutions for keeping a rose... in all its splendor... but then upon its passing... there are memories...
It may be suggested to use ambient light... to avoid the apparent the apparent 'white - light', and then fiddle with PS... only problem is that the synthetic or artificial light may not bring out the natural reflective properites of the silk...
let's see what others say...
and will await your next trial... which is part of error... which is the learning process for us all!
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Pedro Libório
{K:53861} 12/1/2003
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lovely done Antonella,
but a litle less light in it would be better for me...
regards.
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Katia Cutrone
{K:12940} 12/1/2003
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Yeah, I do agree, this is not really a macro, but it's nevertheless great: compositon, combination of colours, and the light...yes, a bit harsh...try witha different lighting, fluorescent is a bit to much, I think...
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Mário Sousa
{K:16985} 12/1/2003
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fantastic photo
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B:)liana
{K:30945} 12/1/2003
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Dear Antonella, for the Macro, sweety you have to come more and more closer ;-) it is so hard to shoot dry flowers, cause they are so dead ;-(
Get closer and change the angle, be careful with the background, less you see it, better it is ;-)
Kiss, BIilana
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Anouschka Rokebrand
{K:6470} 12/1/2003
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Antonella, I like your composition and the colour of the background. I do find the lighting a bit too harsh, but that's just my personal opinion. I would tone it down a bit.
Anouschka
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