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Becky V
{K:9699} 10/26/2003
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Possibly, but black areas/negative space can also be effective. I think emptiness in photographs is highly underused. I don't mind the black space at the bottom of the photo, but perhaps it is a bit too big. I feel the photo might have benefitted if the camera was raised a little, therefore putting the table/wineglass on a vertical third (to go with the existing horizontal third).
Is that a cell phone on the table? Why is it there? What is it saying? I almost find it uneccessary; the wine glass is enough. If you want to keep the phone, it could have been pushed closer to the glass; they don't feel close enough to be related to each other (though I could be wrong . . .)
Aside from these two nitpicks, I really like this photo. The tones are great and the darkened edges add a stylish atmosphere. You're a beginner with B&W?! I would never have known. I hope my first B&W photos look as good!
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jan newman
{K:201} 10/17/2003
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May be a little dark. But I love the whole picture. Sometimes difference makes greatness.
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Rawabi Al-Nuaimi
{K:15659} 10/17/2003
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i like the composition.. pretty catching title too! :)
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Val .
{K:4973} 10/17/2003
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and red wine! ;-))
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Joao Brosque
{K:4197} 10/17/2003
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Different :-)
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Michele Petino
{K:50} 10/17/2003
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Hem...
Too big dark areas!!!
8O)
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