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Clifton Jones
{K:10688} 1/5/2004
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Wonderful colors...your portfolio is simply stunning and inspiring...thank you
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Brenda Orchard
{K:1226} 10/13/2003
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This is sensational as are all of your works here that I have looked at. The vibrancy of colour hits the viewer, the shapes and forms are asthetically p[leasing too. As someone wrote, this would make an incredible poster!
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Toni Martin
{K:5092} 10/4/2003
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I feel that the black corner works. Being that it is a very small and black, it balances the other colors.
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Toni Martin
{K:5092} 10/4/2003
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This is a seven all the way!
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Kristina Kohut
{K:49990} 10/4/2003
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You master of shapes and forms!! This is just so GREAT! I can actually imagine this as a really big poster, hanging on the wall in offices, to make people feel relaxed. It's really wonderful!
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Carolyn Wiesbrock
{K:14051} 9/30/2003
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excellent composition and color!
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Harlan Heald
{K:15732} 9/30/2003
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Excellent! Marvelous control of lighting! Good work!
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Richard Thornton
{K:26442} 9/26/2003
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One of my favorites of the series.
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Elaine Collins
{K:1575} 9/25/2003
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Loe the bright colors and comp!
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Gregory Fiedler
{K:15439} 9/25/2003
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Well Barry your back in full strenght! Great perspective! Almost unreal colors and tones! Paper! What a concept. Great image. Good Stuff Barry!
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Jose Rasquinho
{K:12128} 9/25/2003
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Excellent abstract. Very good colours and light. Nice work. Regards.
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Barry Walthall
{K:5312} 9/25/2003
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Here is a revised version with the black corner gone.
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![](http://thumbs.imageopolis.com/CritiqueImages/0/0/6-TN.jpg)
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Greg Katsoulis
{K:1096} 9/25/2003
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I agree with Alina. Very graphic and the small black space breaks the rhythm of the image. I don't think you can or should re-crop the image, but you might consider extending the green area with photoshop.
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Alina Steiner
{K:64} 9/25/2003
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Yes, indeed, very graphic, excellent play of colors, shapes and curves. One think distracts my attention, the small black corner ... left up. Wherever it goes to my favorites ;) Regards.
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Girish Menon
{K:1384} 9/25/2003
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very graphic. well done.
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Tomo Radovanovic
{K:12788} 9/25/2003
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good idea excellent work
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Antonio Trincone
{K:23167} 9/25/2003
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I like very much paper games and some of the first shots in this site I sent belong to this catagory; here your composition is excellent, the color are vivid too and nicely saturated but overjob was done in post-process leading to some evident imperfection on the right bottom and this detracts a lot
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Marília Ferraz
{K:-4756} 9/25/2003
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Bingo! I'm still happy to see you, Barry. What a fantastic explosion of colors, curves, textures. Creative paper, I guess. Marília
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Kim kyungsang
{K:14135} 9/25/2003
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wonderful color expression!
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