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Hussam AL_ Khoder
{K:79545} 10/6/2007
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VERY UNIQUE AND PERFECT SHOT.
WELL DONE.7/7
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Sam Kh
{K:19017} 10/5/2007
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attractive and creative image
well done
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Etem Etem
{K:3551} 10/2/2007
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Amazing !!!
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Maja Š
{K:17951} 10/1/2007
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Excellent..as always dear Evren..
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tapas banerjee
{K:1711} 9/29/2007
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Well taken!
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Gustavo Scheverin
{K:164501} 9/29/2007
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Interesante y original, un toque de misterio para este retrato.
Felicitaciones!
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Spencer Clark
{K:409} 9/29/2007
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Hmm, not too bad compositionally and I like the ideas of the lights. However, on her face, it is rather dark. While this might have been intentional, I think it really would have made a better photograph if at least one light had been a bit higher up. Perhaps a light outside of the frame slightly infront of her face or bounce light from the cieling ... or even a flashlight dimly shining towards her. Anything to bring just that touch of light so that we can identify her eyes & face a bit better. As it stands, I can only focus on what I am not seeing ... not in a positive way either ...
What I would have done:
Set the camera up on a tripod. Have the camera with a flash setup with a bounce card on the flash at a 90 degree angle. Aka, the flash is firing directly above and some of it is being bounced in the direction of the model.
I would have the image set around 100 or 200 ISO with f22. This will give it a very long shutter speed - I'd want at least 4 seconds give or take. What this will do: it will give the model the light needed to bring out her features a bit more while keeping the moody atmosphere of the lighting. I'd probably have to take two or three shots adjusting the settings until it was just right.
Another really cool thing I might do: Set an off-camera flash to go off with my camera - no on-camera flash. Have it to the left (the darkest side) at -3 setting with direct flash. It'd be perhaps two feet above her head and two feet infront of her. This would give her very dramatic lighting - with the shutter speed and aperture set to get in that ambient light - it'd make a superb shot. Just my 2 cents.
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