I understand the concept of black and white pseudo-industrial photography, and this is a great example of it. This is a good photo and I love the angle, but it would be nice to see a little more of the rusty detail on the side of the tall tower. This gas fixture is sort of representative of a struggle for fuel in the world right now. It's presence is ominous, but if we could see its weaknesses in the structure like rust on the sides and stains and imperfections, perhaps we could restore some faith in the American fuel industry. (maybe). My suggestion is take it earlier in the morning, when the lighting will be a little convenient, and just comming over the edge, or in the evening, when the lighting is just going down. Watch some black and white short film movies that have still shots. This can give you an idea as to the lighting I see. It's an amazing shot. Well done.