Hi Sal, Very cool composition, but maybe a tad dark for my taste. Not sure what feel / atmosphere you wanted to achieve. To me, increasing the contrast and brightness a bit would make the image a bit stronger (see attachment) .
Dunno why, I'm afraid it's because that's closer to what I expected, and if that's the case, I'm not sure it's a valid alternative; rules and expectations are to be broken to keep an open mind and stay creative....
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