Hi Sara, Nice compositino and I like the cropping in here allot, the idea is creeative, but ther emight be some way to get better results, By moving the model a little to the right, the light will be casted on her face, like this you will be avoding the shadows on the face and the over exposore on the vail, also you might need to work a little on the noise on the picture, beside that, keep it up, Salam,
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