Hi Ron, Nice, natural looking portrait, and a very good tonal range. I feel the center of weight in this image lies a bit to the left, whereas I believe cropping off a tad on the right side wouldcreate a bit more balance. Good shot, though.
Very nice portrait, love her smile. The choice for B&W is excellent, adds some drama to the picture. The thing i dont really like is that she's right in the middle. Maybe a little crop at the right, bringing her head more to the right could help. Overall still a wonderfull picture, its just a suggestion!