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Jim Fuglestad
{K:1564} 1/5/2003
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John, I'd have to say that I rather like the centered comp on this one. It seems to point to the cloud activity. I also like the patterns of the dune and the bush down to the base of the lighthouse. Looks like you used a polarizer, which brought out the nice sky, but caused the bottom to lose a little detail in the darks. Maybe a stop underexposed? Regardless, very nice.
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John Black
{K:1047} 1/5/2003
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Hey guys, thanks for all the comments. I appreciate all the constructive feedback as it makes me a better photographer. Thanks again.
JB
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Kenneth Kwan
{K:3084} 1/5/2003
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Good light and nice clouds. I think centring the light house works well for this composition. The bit of sand and the trees frame the shot well. But, I think a slight crop from the top can give the composition a little more balance.
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jeff lynch
{K:4770} 1/5/2003
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Great colors. I agree with Dawna about the composition though. The sky looks very cool in this one man! Nice work.
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Deleted User
{K:4598} 1/5/2003
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beautiful cloud formation and a rich, deep blue sky. I might have made the lighthouse just a bit less centered to make the capture a bit less static.
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Scott J Machalk
{K:173} 1/5/2003
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I really like this one. You broke a rule by centering the lighthouse and I think it really works
great. All those diagonals from the clouds and the beach really bring your eye in. The polarizer
really adds nice drama to the sky too. -Scott
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Dawna G.
{K:7709} 1/5/2003
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agreed - good space at top of image with a detailed dramatic sky. I would have like just a little more space on the right side, so the lighthouse was not centred, but the image works anyhow.
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Jerry Ann Deddo
{K:435} 1/5/2003
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I like the way the clouds seem to swirl around the tip of the lighthouse. Leaving the top 1/3 of the photo just sky also gives it a bigger feel - it helps to balance the composition and bring the attention to the lighthouse. Had you cropped it down the ground would have pulled too much focus. Very nice!
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