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Jenna Lynn Schneider
{K:-9} 7/15/2005
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Wow that does make a lot of difference! Thank you so much!
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david cunningham
{K:8255} 7/15/2005
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jennifer... here's a quick work on that:
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david cunningham
{K:8255} 7/15/2005
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jenna... better already. it really is a great image. if you really wanted to add part of the head back it can be done in photoshop. you then enter into the realm of the philosophy of truth. personally, i'd add the missing part of the head back. you wouldn't be altering the truth of the moment. it's all about the final image... david
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Jenna Lynn Schneider
{K:-9} 7/15/2005
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Thanks for the tips! here is an edited copy: (david, I cant include more of the head because thats the end of the shot! :) In my haste to capture the moment i chopped it off, he moved right after I took the shot so i couldnt fix it by taking another! woops)
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david cunningham
{K:8255} 7/15/2005
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jenna... really wonderful shot. i think it's the best in your portfolio. i would also crop to below the fusball handles. i would also include a bit more of the head on the left side of the image. great composition... david
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Terry S.
{K:3083} 7/8/2005
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Interesting composition - I like this! Nice reflection on the piano. I might crop just a tad off the top to eliminate the handles on the foosball table. Nice job!
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April .
{K:4832} 7/7/2005
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perfect capture.. congratss
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