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tom rumland
{K:14874} 12/10/2004
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michael, i like it. dig the composition the most. would love to see it larger, same format, just larger so the leaf occupies more of the frame without disturbing the ratios in the composition but making it more graphical in nature. the extremely subdued background offsets the cacophony of textures, colors, and reflections on the leaf very nicely. a beauty!
take care,
tom
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Michael Kanemoto
{K:22115} 12/6/2004
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Lukasz:
Your version is better. No question from me - thanks for the work.
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Lukasz Kuczkowski
{K:14687} 12/6/2004
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Hi Michael, it was not my idea to make a close-up;
when I see the original photo, I see lots of space in the upper part of the shot which only disturbs my view (IMHO); what I would like to obtain is emphasize on the main object and its wonderful drops you captured in excellent way;
the background looks fine so we can use it as well
my vision you can find below
regards
Lukasz
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Michael Kanemoto
{K:22115} 12/6/2004
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Lukasz -
Here is a crop, a little tighter and perhaps more interesting to give you a feel of the detail you would see in a print copy.
Better? Or worse?
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Lukasz Kuczkowski
{K:14687} 12/6/2004
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lovely raindrops and details; for the composition I would crop the upper part of the image because it adds nothing to the shot;
regards
Lukasz
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