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{K:6897} 12/9/2004
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Hi! I love this portrait. Love the light on it... Your face also (of course)... Looks natural (maybe forced to smile by somebody else).
Where have you been? Haven't "heard" about you since you posted this one.
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Paul S
{K:894} 11/24/2004
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I just realized this.
Your color series has featured yellow, red and blue. A reference to the Columbian flag?
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Paul S
{K:894} 11/24/2004
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Certainly the red in this image makes it very striking. The red is a wonderful match for the brown eyes and really pulls them out.
I would agree with the comment on the DOF. Although the eyes are the single most important part of an image and need to be in focus, having the foreground out of focus certainly is a distraction.
The lighting needs improvement. The single light source from picture left is hard and leaves a very unflattering and distracting shadow from the nose in the middle of the image. This shadow distorts the contour of the cheek and makes the cheek appear much larger than it should. Indeed, it appears almost swollen. It also flattens the nose and does not give it much definition.
The strong light also creates some hot spots on the tip of the nose and the cheek. Perhaps a little make-up could soften these a bit. The benefit of the strong light is the hot spots on the wig. Certainly those add highlights to the wig.
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Paulo Martel
{K:2550} 11/17/2004
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Dear Adriana,
very nice, the eyes are lovely (your eyes ? :) ). One small critique: perhaps the depth of field should have been greater, to have the cheek in focus too. A smaller aperture ?... But this is a very personal opinion of course, because it is also interesting to have only the eyes in perfect focus.
Regards,
Paulo
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{K:2309} 11/15/2004
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Every detail on this photography is unnatural but very beautiful. 7+
Regareds,
Misa Nicinger
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Gustavo Scheverin
{K:164501} 11/15/2004
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Hermoso retrato!
me gusta!
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