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jacques brisebois
{K:73883} 1/2/2009
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great pose and model, you should use your flash to prevent the backlightning... or use two exposure and keep the background of one and the model on the other one like JJ Guy present you...
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Paul Lara
{K:88111} 1/2/2009
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Ah, yes. I didn't see the improved version below. MUCH better.
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J. Alberto Abreu
{K:1190} 1/2/2009
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Paul
Thank you. The rework does work. Thank you for the advice. Alberto
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J. Alberto Abreu
{K:1190} 1/2/2009
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Thank you for your suggestions and alternatives to the photo. I know that it is underexposed. I know I could have used fill flash. But only if I was in range. I was using a longer lens and had to stand a distance that would not make the flash effective. Also due to the location...(under a railroad track structure by a semi-frozen river) I had to deal with with were she and I could stand. Thank you I have more. But this is pose that I loved. I will implement your suggestions. Alberto
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J. Alberto Abreu
{K:1190} 1/2/2009
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Thank you for your suggestions and alternatives to the photo. I know that it is underexposed. I know I could have used fill flash. But only if I was in range. I was using a longer lens and had to stand a distance that would not make the flash effective. Also due to the location...(under a railroad track structure by a semi-frozen river) I had to deal with with were she and I could stand. Thank you I have more. But this is pose that I loved. I will implement your suggestions. Alberto
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神 風
{K:10665} 1/2/2009
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Paul ... Didn't my courtesy rework take care of that somewhat as I totally agree with you?
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Paul Lara
{K:88111} 1/2/2009
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I think levels need to come WAY up, man. She's very underexposed.
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J.J. Guy Longtin
{K:6546} 1/2/2009
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Nicely reworked my friend with great toning!! I was only trying to show him that there was some hope for this photo of the beautiful young lady.
Guy
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神 風
{K:10665} 1/2/2009
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Mr. Abreu (via J.J.),
Mr. Longtin has made a good point of this image of a most beautiful Japanese young lady, but I think I have a much better rework for you highlighting her face, adding a bit of colour to her skin, and then a simple 'Presentation Border' to finish it all off.
What do you think and thanks so much for sharing!
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Courtesy Rework |
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J.J. Guy Longtin
{K:6546} 1/2/2009
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Tough shot with such a bright background - a little fill flash would really improve this one. The other option is to bump up your levels a little (see attached) but it'll blow out your background. Hope you don't mind!
Guy
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