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Balagopal Ambalakkat
{K:0} 4/26/2003
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Thanks guys for all your valuable comments.
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Fabio Keiner
{K:81109} 4/26/2003
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still
life
not dead as a doornail
:)
(maybe a crop will make it more expressive - but is this really necessary? I like it, calm as it is)
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Joy Bhowmik
{K:854} 4/25/2003
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I agree with Mary and Kaj. Here is a suggestion on your image.
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Kaj Nielsen
{K:15279} 4/25/2003
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Good light and contrast, nice compoced, but shadow should not be there. Regards Kaj Nielsen
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MaryBell
{K:32791} 4/25/2003
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There is a disturbing shadow in the lower left-hand corner. A crop would fix it and take the focal point off the middle plain. A little more contrast would be nice too.
Just the same it emotes for me. Here is to a smile:
Old Marley was as dead as a door-nail.
Mind! I don't mean to say that I know, of my own knowledge, what there is particularly dead about a door-nail. I might have been inclined, myself, to regard a coffin-nail as the deadest piece of ironmongery in the trade. But the wisdom of our ancestors is in the simile; and my unhallowed hands shall not disturb it, or the Country's done for. You will therefore permit me to repeat, emphatically, that Marley was as dead as a door-nail.
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Luis Costa - Lucaz
{K:9205} 4/25/2003
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Very nice work, regards!
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