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amanda guthrie
{K:93} 4/22/2003
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Thanks Guys, I realized this one needed help, thats why I posted it, so I could get some feedback, I think the concepte was good but the composition neede more care.live and learn =-)
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Onur Aydin
{K:9815} 4/22/2003
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I believe you needed a bigger composition. Even their shadows should be included .. Still wonderful view, it did not stop that one. Very cute still, but you could make it much better.
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Delketed Deleted
{K:1632} 4/21/2003
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I like this as a low contrast version; I do agree that a little more room on the left and top would have been good, but I think the image has a really good feel of motion and sets the beach scene and the joy of the children playing really well. The position of their bodies and forms really also complement each other when you just look at form in abstraction. Great work.
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Bob Helvey
{K:619} 4/21/2003
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Good emotion & vacation memory.
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Ken Daniels
{K:1000} 4/21/2003
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A bit soft. Could use much more contrast. Cropping is a bit too tight on the left side. Pleasant photo though.
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