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Steve Hennerley
{K:5776} 2/6/2006
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Hi Danielle -
I love the concept of this - great vision (pun intended!) with huge potential. Unfortunately - I do really think it loses from having the broken glass unsharp.
I would have tried a smaller aperture - though that may have not resulted in the nice dof of your son's face.
A second alternative would have been to shoot both the window and your son seperately - using a white background for the window. You should then have been able to overlay the two in PS.
I agree with Susie though - his expression is perfect!
All the best
Steve
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Susie OConnor
{K:34798} 1/30/2006
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Good for you Danielle! I think if we all followed your new thought we'd be better off. Shoot what you love! This is great. His expression is perfect and the title fits so well. So glad that he apparently did not get hurt! ) Susie
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Kay McIntire
{K:11787} 1/30/2006
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Great capture- never try to fit into anybody elses mold anyway- go out there and photograph whatever it is you want to! You had a great idea here with his eye in the middle- well done!
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Zed Adam
{K:593} 1/30/2006
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I like it. It looks like a poster for a film about troubled teenagers.
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Jim Goldstein
{K:21230} 1/30/2006
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Wow this has great potential for stock I would think. I could see this running in a don't do drugs ad. I like the composition and juxtoposition of youth and broken glass. There is a lot that can be read into a photo like this. Very well done!
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Kambiz K
{K:37420} 1/30/2006
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fantastic image with a profund meaning
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Danielle Toews
{K:1035} 1/30/2006
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not sure why but it looks soft here.
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