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Critique By:
Shoot Mike (K:3255)
5/24/2005 5:19:31 PM
Alicia,
Another good try. Your lighting is a bit hard and bright causing the blown out spots on your face and chest. The crop is a little tight for me also. I would like a little more room all the way around the picture. The crop as is makes you look cramped. One last thing, you need to pay attention to the way your hair is hanging...
This is all just my opinion and I'm just making suggestions to improve.
Mike
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Critique By:
giovanni fracasso (K:183)
5/22/2005 6:42:43 AM
good image 
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Critique By:
Rick Page (K:5242)
5/22/2005 6:14:03 AM
Hi Alicia, I like your infrared shot here. Try some landscapes on one of those days when there are lots of thunderhead clouds in the sky. You'll love it. See you,.........RICK PAGE Ky.......usefilm
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Critique By:
RC. Dany (K:64104)
5/22/2005 3:32:40 AM
Excellent work Alicia.
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Critique By:
In Transit (K:29432)
5/21/2005 6:03:47 AM
May be I am a bit odd... but why the jeans with such a bustier...
Suggest avoid the rear return of the arms... and show some of the natural waist curve... and the start to work...
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Critique By:
Orlando Oliveira (K:587)
5/21/2005 4:25:53 AM
very nice shot here love your portfolio
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Critique By:
Onur Özbakan (K:16763)
5/19/2005 3:05:31 PM
looks really tweaked but creatively according to the mood of view. well done Alicia!
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Critique By:
Franz Thoma (K:3365)
5/17/2005 8:41:15 PM
I like the idea, but I share Mike's comment as well. Great how you kept the colour of the jeans.
And, first of all, your beautiful face and view makes the picture!
Kind regards
Franz
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Critique By:
Shoot Mike (K:3255)
5/17/2005 7:47:08 PM
Alicia,
I like the tones and the idea. Your back and shoulders are a little blown, and have lost some detail because of that. The crop is too tight on the bottom (cut off fingers)and also on the right side (cutting half of your arm off). Just my opinion... I would reshoot.
Mike
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Critique By:
Uri Lidsky (K:4932)
5/16/2005 7:17:34 PM
now, this one is really fine. like all the others- lighting is very good. great composition and cropping. is there something sad in the picture? i'm not really sure about the 'feel'.
Uri.
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Critique By:
Uri Lidsky (K:4932)
5/16/2005 7:15:17 PM
i love the lighting. very interesting image. her experssion is very well captured.
Uri.
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Critique By:
Uri Lidsky (K:4932)
5/16/2005 7:13:27 PM
very nice cropping light and composition!
well done. Uri.
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Critique By:
Uri Lidsky (K:4932)
5/16/2005 7:12:31 PM
cute... nice exposure.
Uri.
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Critique By:
Jennifer Lord-Palmer (K:2596)
5/16/2005 2:08:42 PM
THIS IS AWESOME! I love the Compisition. The lighting is fantastic! The movement of the "scarf" makes this so appealing and unique. Wonderful job!
jenni
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Critique By:
Jennifer Lord-Palmer (K:2596)
5/16/2005 1:36:44 PM
Love the mood, and her eyes. I agree with Pat. It has a great vintage feel.
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Critique By:
Pat Fruen (K:12076)
5/16/2005 2:00:25 AM
I find this photograph very appealing. I like the vintage feeling and the mood.
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Critique By:
A K (K:8499)
5/16/2005 12:48:28 AM
Lovely shot, great mood. First communion perhaps?
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Critique By:
Mark Beltran (K:32612)
5/15/2005 7:07:52 PM
Our last hope; and a very moving photograph.
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Critique By:
Dubravko Grakalic (K:25235)
5/15/2005 6:52:10 PM
nice photo
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Critique By:
Paulo Vinícius (K:2657)
5/4/2005 10:57:09 PM
Good tones and well done composition.
Congratulations!
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Critique By:
Mariusz Ciesla (K:217)
5/4/2005 8:59:32 AM
Great, moody photo. I love it.
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Critique By:
Frank Beer (K:10112)
5/3/2005 10:21:45 PM
Wow, excellent presentation of a portrait!
I like the crop, the natural posing and the colors.
Frank
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Critique By:
Girish Chonkar (K:6903)
5/3/2005 5:41:00 AM
Nice posture and good composition. Very soft effect.
You have scope to play with light arrangement and some good mood on the models face. Hope to see it in your next upcoming
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Critique By:
Roberto Bertone (K:13239)
5/2/2005 11:54:58 PM
Splendido ritratto e posa, bellissima modella!!!!
Compl.!!!
Saluti.
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Critique By:
Erik Shea (K:1600)
5/2/2005 11:48:02 PM
Beautiful pose and beautiful shot.
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Critique By:
Dick van Breda (K:4655)
5/2/2005 11:46:44 PM
Great portrait of a beautiful model. Great pose and excellent composed. Very good lighting and details. Great work.
Best regards, Dick
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Critique By:
Patrick Ziegler (K:21797)
5/2/2005 11:26:44 PM
A realy gorgeous Portrait. Great lighting! Pose, composition... Terrific.
I hop you do not mind but I gave it a quick tweaking... Not to medel but I thought your eyes need to stand out a bit more. I hope you like it.
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Critique By:
Hani Ghayhab (K:3723)
5/2/2005 11:23:16 PM
BEAUTIFUL!
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Critique By:
Laurie Gould (K:11942)
5/2/2005 11:12:33 PM
Beautiful portrait! Has a very natural feel to it. The lighting and the pose are both great. Thanks for sharing.
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Critique By:
Guido Tweepenninckx (K:20076)
5/2/2005 11:04:39 PM
stunning portrait
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