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Critique By:
Kevin Bennett (K:185)
9/15/2006 6:39:10 PM
hey justyn, it been awhile since uv added photos... welcome back.... great stop motion photo, i need sombody so willing to let me shoot... her red hair really sticks out, i wish u could have caught a shadow of her on the wall... great work bud
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Critique By:
Elizabeth Ford (K:-120)
7/19/2006 4:16:51 PM
seriously
i cant get over how amazing this shot is
and...i really dont have anything else to say
so sorry
but really its incredible
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Critique By:
Alessandro Capelli (K:34805)
7/17/2006 8:50:41 AM
so nice girl!
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Critique By:
Justin Campbell (K:1398)
7/17/2006 5:06:40 AM
Thank you anne.
justin
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Critique By:
Justin Campbell (K:1398)
7/17/2006 5:04:15 AM
Ah, the focus point, haha. i see. Yes, you are infact right about that, her arm is much more in focus than her face. I could try and blame that on my lenses ridiculously slow autofocus, but i should have been more patient anyway.
I've used tamron and from what i've used they're certainly better than what i have. I'm actually budgeting for a canon fixed 100mm macro which should certainly solve my clarity issues.
thank you again, justin
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Critique By:
Justin Campbell (K:1398)
7/17/2006 4:56:11 AM
Thank you and she thanks you as well. I hope to be able to share a few more in similar fashion we've been working on.
thanks, justin
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Critique By:
Christopher Gooding (K:2278)
7/17/2006 4:38:45 AM
My apologies...your comp and crop are fine. Really, the length of her arms lends a sensuality to the photo. My comment as to the focal point should have been more directly stated as focus point. Meaning that's what appears to be sharpest in the frame.
Your lens is most likely the culprit. As an alternate lens, I can heartily recommend the Tamron 2.8, 28-70 zoom. It's much less expensive (when compared to Canon OEM, and a much better performer than Quantaray or Older Sigmas).
Relax on the crop. My eyes are most definitely drawn to hers.
Nice work,
Christopher
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Critique By:
Justin Campbell (K:1398)
7/17/2006 4:29:52 AM
Thank you very much christopher for commenting. I certainly agree about the sharpness but unfortunately there isn't much i can do. I was using an ISO-200 and lowering to 100 wouldn't have much of a difference. It's my lens. It's a very worn-in cheaper Quantaray. In regards to the focal point, i suppoose the upper arm could be construed as the center/lead but since it's so close to the face, which most certainly was my desired focal point, i'm not sure how i could have cropped differently. Perhaps you'd be willing elaborate?
Thank you again,
justin
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Critique By:
Christopher Gooding (K:2278)
7/17/2006 4:11:31 AM
Agreed. She is beautiful. I especially like your composition and pose. Your choice of locale is also inspired. I like the texture of the over mortared brick.
One complaint however, your image could be sharper. The focal point appears to be her leading elbow.
Regards,
Christopher
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Critique By:
Roger Skinner (K:81846)
7/17/2006 3:49:22 AM
yeah.. just goin thru some backpages...nice one nice one indeed
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Critique By:
Roger Skinner (K:81846)
7/17/2006 3:47:03 AM
she does well
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Critique By:
RC. Dany (K:64104)
7/16/2006 3:23:02 PM
Excellent .
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Critique By:
whoiswho t (K:10700)
7/16/2006 9:26:01 AM
a very good moment taken.
i loved the lovely fresh expression...
good job!
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Critique By:
Roger Skinner (K:81846)
7/16/2006 9:15:45 AM
great height achieved by the model a great moment to freeze..
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Critique By:
Liz Wallis (K:26133)
7/16/2006 9:07:16 AM
wonderful action captured while retaining great detail and clarity..an excellent shot
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Critique By:
Yatharth Kumar (K:2914)
7/16/2006 8:40:28 AM
Very nice shot u have captured. The action of the lady is very much amazing.
Good job.
Reagrds,
Yatharth.
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Critique By:
Hakan AKIRMAK (K:15913)
6/14/2006 10:28:18 PM
Excellent work Justin! Congratulations!
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Critique By:
Suki Days (K:1684)
6/14/2006 9:58:57 PM
wonderfuly taken and so well impressive composed,
thank you,
gali.
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Critique By:
Roberto Arcari Farinetti (K:209486)
3/8/2006 5:44:50 PM
so justin... a crazy moment hard in the hand!!!
nicely
roby
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Critique By:
Justin Campbell (K:1398)
2/28/2006 1:53:23 AM
Thanks Roger but i intended it not to be interpreted as blood at all. I was going for something more evil, hence the title. If you look at the other image in the series you'll see i have followed this pattern. http://www.usefilm.com/image/961911.html
Thank you for commenting.
-justin
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Critique By:
Roger Skinner (K:81846)
2/28/2006 1:45:27 AM
cool idea maybe the blood should be a tad redder..
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Critique By:
Justin Campbell (K:1398)
2/27/2006 1:15:48 PM
Thank you. you're input really helps. Also, welcome to usefilm! you seem to be developing a nice portfolio.
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Critique By:
Aragorn Aall (K:120)
2/27/2006 8:21:22 AM
Well the idea is sweet  and it looks like it's comming along great. See a hair on the top of her head wich is annoying agains the background...hehe other than that hair it looks good. Like the lighting too.
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Critique By:
louis Michael (K:4210)
11/11/2005 3:54:50 AM
Wow,it is really a sharp.I don"t what more you can ask for.
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Critique By:
louis Michael (K:4210)
11/11/2005 3:52:26 AM
Wow,it is really a sharp.Very good.
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Critique By:
Huub Bogaers (K:3065)
11/8/2005 2:02:08 PM
This one is much better - the skin is too light on the other one, makes less of a "dark" impression.
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Critique By:
Hesham Abouzekry (K:15927)
11/7/2005 5:55:00 AM
fantastic.
H.A
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Critique By:
Hesham Abouzekry (K:15927)
11/7/2005 5:52:08 AM
great perfect.
greatest idea.
H.A
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Critique By:
Carlos Carpinteiro (K:1563)
11/5/2005 4:24:07 PM
I like it.Good.
cheers
C.Carpinteiro
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Critique By:
Shaun Rullens (K:2732)
11/3/2005 6:16:33 AM
Very interesting, But very different too.
Shawn
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